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Prove It - Ch 16 by firelord65, literature

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The next few days were surprisingly tame. Four ruled training with an iron fist, keeping everyone in line with a few short words or a sharp glare. Eric wasn’t around, much to Christina’s joy. She refused to shut up about it, going on about how much smoother training was without that “egotistical jackass lurking around.” I couldn’t say I agreed. Training was different, but I’m not sure if it was comparable to our normal routine. Four focused training on Dauntless protocols and procedures as well as physical attributes other than marksmanship. We ran the city twice on one day and once more the next. I was th

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The tension in the training room was palpable as soon as we were all gathered together again. It wasn’t between the initiates, either. Both teams had exchanged high fives and handshakes as they filtered in, commending each other for a fair game earlier. Peter may have squinted his eyes when he shook Christina’s hand, but I had to admit that he didn’t say anything sarcastic. Four and Eric however were far less amicable towards each other. The former watched Eric through slitted eyes, leaning against the wall with his arms crossed tightly. Eric blatantly ignored him, whistling to himself as he unpacked a crate full of slim me

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When we returned from the field everyone in my collection of friends immediately headed back to the dorm for some rest. Four told us that we didn’t have to report to the training room until noon so most of the initiates wanted to take advantage of the time off. “Tris, hang on,” Four said quickly after dismissing the groups. He twitched his fingers, summoning me closer. I nodded goodbye to Will and Christina. I stepped towards my instructor, crossing my arms tightly. “Yeah?” I asked. My previous conversations with him hadn’t always been terribly civil. He mirrored my crossed arms. “I just wanted to

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“Tris! Tris you gotta get up, now!” someone shouted frantically, shaking my shoulders. I tore open my eyes and tried to see what in God’s name was going on. “Don’t shake her, she’s in the infirmary for Pete’s sake!” a second voice chimed in from my other side. I did a double take, trying to see through the painfully bright lights to tell just who was waking me up so disgracefully. Will was to my left, looking quite concerned. Christina was the one being loud to my right, still shaking my arm. I shoved her hand away tiredly and sat up on my elbows. “I’m up, I’m up,” I gr

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Agonizing pain was my morning companion, urging me to awaken and begin my day. The ache in my sides throbbed, forcing me to finally admit defeat and peel my eyes open. The dorm was pitch black, filled with the quietly-breathing forms of my fellow initiates. I valiantly tried to turn on my side to sleep for longer, but that only made the aching worse. I had to get up and try to do something to make the pain lessen. Sucking in deep breaths, I sat up and staggered to the bathroom. My reflection stared back at me, surprising me with how haggard and sunken even my eyes looked. Twists of my hair had fallen out of its tie and were hanging in loose

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The next few days were brutal. I got up painfully early every day, as usual, and made my way to the training room to run. It was empty when I got there and stayed that way the entire time I ran. Part of me was crestfallen. The more rational side of me grumbled that it was unreasonable to have expected Eric to show up every single morning. After the third day, I wasn’t surprised anymore. My goal each morning was ten quick laps, though I stayed for a few more depending on how winded I was. I left for breakfast sore and starving. Al was uncharacteristically silent at meals now. I thanked my lucky stars and tried to enjoy it while it laste

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“What’s it going to be? Skill or bravery, Stiff?” Four questioned intently. Everyone’s eyes were on me and the tension was palpable in the air. I clenched my hands into fists and carefully weighed my options. Al was a terrified mess, but I wasn’t certain that Will was doing much better under the stress. My own skills at shooting weren’t tested beyond the few shots that Eric had walked me through this past hour. Except, that was only partially true. While he had given me tips and helped me to be more comfortable with the practice, all of my sighting and shots were one hundred percent my own. All I had to do

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I didn’t realize at first what happened. The truck had been barrelling along behind it’s partner, taking the rough terrain in stride seemingly without issue. Then, a massive boom reverberated through the steel walls and I had to cling with both hands to the ceiling strap. Both Eric and the driver shouted curses, the crimson haired driver sounding especially frantic as he hauled the careening vehicle back into control. “What the fuck? Did we just blow a tire on fucking sand?” Eric shouted, trying to stick his head out the window to see the damage. The driver grabbed the radio set above his dashboard and was relaying in

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Christina held her hand out, pulling Al off of the mat with a frown creasing her face. He’d gone down after two minutes of awkward sparring between the two of them. I looked over at Four. He didn’t seem to be very impressed overall. He circled Christina’s name on the chalkboard and tossed the chalk down angrily. “Right, so now that you’ve gotten at the very least one fight under your belt, you should be understanding the physical demands of being a Dauntless soldier,” he said gruffly once the ring was clear. “Every day we will continue these fights. Try to use them as opportunities to further your sk

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The compound was busier now than it had been when I’d first woken up. I passed by a group of dependents who were playing some kind of tag in the dark halls, twinkling my fingers in a wave. When I got to the dining hall, I settled into line and hunted down one of the coveted double-chocolate muffins. It wasn’t as rich as the infamous Dauntless cake, but the sugar and carbs would keep me from starving during training. I smiled blithely at the few Dauntless who made eye contact with me. Despite the faction’s outward appearance, I didn’t find too many people here who actively disliked us initiates. Searching for any fami

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Prove It, Ch 1 by firelord65, literature

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My heart pounded in my ears when we jumped off the train for the first time. Christina was shrieking with laughter and I realized I was as well, jitters racing through me as I pushed myself up to stand. “We did it!” she turned to me, rubbing gravel out from her clothes. The heavy denim and leather that the Dauntless always wear started to make some sense to me. “Yeah, we jumped off a train!” I exclaimed just as eagerly. I turned to look at the other initiates spread out across the roof and my heart stopped just as suddenly as it had begun racing. A dauntless-born initiate was being pulled back from the ledge, babbli

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Artist // Hobbyist // Literature

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Hello! Not much to say. I'm a hobbyist in basically every category. Writing, photography, pixel art, game design some crafting - there's always more to do and to try.

Favourite Movies

James Bond, Ocean's Eleven, Jurassic Park

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CSI, Star Trek, Criminal Minds

Favourite Books

Harry Potter

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Legend of Zelda, Mario,

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Wii

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Art, Writing, Music, Crime Fighting

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firelord65

Apr 19, 2019

Obligatory 2019 Update

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Hi DA. I see you're still a thing. You see I'm still a thing. Glad we're both aware of one another. Not a lot has been going on for me in the art/crafty world. Not in a publishable/sharable/exciting way at least. I haven't done traditional art in years. Haven't made progress with jewelry really. All my work has been in fanfiction and I honestly don't know if it's worth the effort to dump it on here, too. Maintaining FF and AO3 is taxing as it is when I need to update even minor edits or scrape out old author's notes. This all sounds super grumpy, which I'm not at all. Good things have happened to me, DA! I'm married. My partner and I are bo

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May 12, 2016

hey look, I'm still alive

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xPiko-Chanx

Mar 17, 2019

I really appreciate it~!

Of course!!

Happy birthday! Love your writing!

firelord65

Nov 30, 2015

Thank you! I'm so sorry for the late response

; I'm afraid I don't check DA very frequently anymore :c
Also! I know you were reading Prove It- Just want to let you know that there are 3 more chapters that I posted this month! (Finally snagged some precious free time)

aiwannigirl

Nov 30, 2015

Any response is a good one! Thank you so much for uploading, I did happen to find your story on ff.net, but it's always nice to see here. Thanks for your time and awesome writing!

firelord65

Dec 1, 2015

Oh good! I know that some DA people had found the other sites, but I just wanted to be sure that I was letting people know!

KpoperMaper

Feb 3, 2013

Thanks for the fave